Phronemophobia's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ellie Ann Sketch]

Easily your best Ellie, and it seems like you're constantly making little changes to her outfit.

(Those details are going to be your punishment if you ever get to a chapter in your comic that requires you to draw her in every other panel.)

[Simple Smug Mitsuru Illustration]

You need to work on that smug. If it wasn't for the title, I would have assumed she was wearing a tired, yet gentle smile. At this point, I'd prefer it. I think Wendy's has made me stop liking smug anime girls.

[Plague of Love]

Plague Knight is such a lucky bastard to have Mona by his side. It's a shame most give up on his campaign, because I still think his is the best one within Treasure Trove.

What I really love about this work is that it gives more than enough information to understand their relationship without having to know anything about the game.

[Zora the Monster Girl]

A full-body drawing. Very nice. Not sure what's going on with the breasts, but they remind me of a young math teacher whose chest was somehow sticking out from the middle of her torso. It weirded me out a little and Zora seems to be built in a similar fashion. Her right leg appears to be facing one direction while her foot is twisted into another. I love the sweet, smiling face and her colors. Overall, I liking seeing the improvement in your work. Hopefully, I'll get to meet more of your characters.

[Bleh! 3.0]

Another terrific reminder that Masako is playfully adorable. Still, I think the thumb might be a little too small and I split my bottom lip trying to imitate the pose. You now owe me a new bottom lip, Chops.

[Hyper doggo boi]

Ah, the majestic Shih-Tzu. Soft, cuddly... kinda brainless (or, at least, mine was). I'm a sucker for dogs, especially the Toy breeds, so that alone merits five stars, but then there's the expression you chose for his face. That is the absolute best.

Oddlem responds:

I love themm, such big doofuses. lel This boi has a permanent tongue sticking out though, sometimes I'll flick it up and down and he'll either bite it or not react at all.

[Isabelle Turns Over a New Leaf]

I think she's terrifying, and the unnatural movement adds to the creepiness (particularly, the arms). Still, I love how bright her colors are and I appreciate the extra time you put in to animate the ears, tail, hair, and expression separately.

Also, Waluigi is best girl in Smash, but Isabelle is a close second.

Techycutie responds:

I’ll keep working on it! Thank you for pointing out any weird stuff. This is my 3rd animation using puppet tool animation in After Effects. I’m trying to figure out some way to make the body movements look clean and not warp as much for next time. Sadly not many instructional videos or tutorials for it exist and mainly they just teach you how to set up files and such.. so it’s a trial and error process. Also, When will Waluigi get what he deserves. Smh

[Witch]

Why not? My grocery store already has Halloween candy and decorations available on the shelves for purchase.

I love the colors and, for no particular reason, the somewhat tired look in her eyes.

[Mindy Mint]

What if you only use MS Paint? I mean, quite green! ...adorable, too.

(I like MS Paint.)

:(

Fabulous-fishstick42 responds:

I like it too I just prefer firealpaca

[Ariel]

This is far more "normal" than I was expecting from you, but it's not bad at all.

Just doodling random things that come to mind, are you?

Fabulous-fishstick42 responds:

Yeah pretty much. I've also been experimenting with different styles.