Phronemophobia's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Uganda Knuckles]

To better emphasize the joke, you should have depicted a small tribe of the red and blue varieties, since it kinda requires a group of them to properly recreate the meme, and possibly included their leader commander Gaztons, because I've seen him in many of the videos. With only a single, chubby Knuckles, this could just as well be about all those Knuckles Sings videos, rather than VRChat.

Outside of that, he looks great. Seems happy, well fed, and fully knowledgeable on "de way."

CrispyToastYT responds:

Oh shoot, you're right...!

[Natsuki]

I always enjoy bright colors, but I don't know much about any of the girls.
I'm guessing I should play this at some point, huh?

Fabulous-fishstick42 responds:

It is quite an enjoyable game. The beginning is a bit slow, but after day 2 it really starts to pick up.

[.əuld]

That also means this is officially the best art of 2018!

[Razzelle]

A straightforward drawing. Nothing really stands out. Makes me think of Amethyst.

Since she's not facing forward, it seems weird for the trio of freckles on the left cheek to be so close to the mouth when the right trio isn't. Granted, freckles are not realistically symmetrical on a person's face, but if Razz were to be looking straight at me, would they still be in their same spots with one patch right against her mouth?

Bertn1991 responds:

Both sets of freckles were original close to the mouth. I moved one but forgot to move the other. It's been corrected ^u^

[My Face]

Madness? Why, that's the magic of winter break! *throws glitter around the place, then groans at the realization that he'll be the one having to clean up the mess afterwards*

I want to see more art that has you and your characters doing something to better showcase your/their personality and hobbies. We all know the Fishstick is Fabulous, but it's just as important to know why the Fishstick is Fabulous.

Fabulous-fishstick42 responds:

Glitter truly is the herpes of the craft world. As for doing more with characters, there is a character I wrote named Becky, who I have made skits with on my YouTube, who I've been planing on making one or two panel comics with. Tell me what you think.

[Dem apples]

They do look tasty, but I doubt those trees would be willing to share them with me.

I love your choice of colors, by the way.

[Satan's Little Helper]

On the plus side, you got a break from school, some delightful gifts (I hope), and the free time to create this charming piece of art! That's a pretty good trade-off, isn't it?

[Map of Far Land]

Man, look at the territory on Moleberry! I know size doesn't matter, but wow!

Oh, and seeing Maya in the middle of those four is just... well, it ain't right. I'm not complaining, of course, but it does make me wonder if it's okay to give this artwork an E rating?

Regardless, I'm gonna need a cold shower now. Thank you, Bertn, for this carnal creation of cartography.

Bertn1991 responds:

Yep, Moleberry's mighty mighty, just lettin' it all hang out. And yeah, Maya is such a hussy. It really should be rated T, at least.

And no, thank YOU for taking something as mild and boring as a map and making me smile ^.^

[Christmas with Lady Marleen]

Marleen's adorable, but I would like to see the entire band together for the holidays.

Bertn1991 responds:

Ah, you're right. Maybe I should make a follow up for New Years and feature all four of them :)

[Random Garnet]

This is Garnet... could be better.

Bertn1991 responds:

Very true. It mostly for practice though. Nothing too ambitious.